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RulerZigzagComment by Matthew: Hello from the critique club
You have a good start in a better looking model than MAK (Hanae's other half)! Only joking if you read this MAK...
This image scored pretty well and you have some good comments already. I think that you did a good job of getting the set up right, and it is definitely recogniseable.
Areas where is falls short of Hanae's attempt are in the lighting a little - you have a yellow tinge (which you could have sorted in post-processing), and the lighting is not as strong. To make light more harsh, you need to use a smaller light source and/or move it further away - but at the expense of brightness (requiring longer shutter times).
Your subject looks a little more crumpled than Hanae's MAK - this distracts a little as the folds lead the eye away from the phone.
You have sharpened your image less than Hanae did - I think that Hanae's image is a little oversharpened, but somewhere in between your images might be my preference.
Good luck with your next challenge.
Cheers
Matthew
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