Sandys Wrath
by tjbel05

Comment by Neil:
Commenting only: Great capture. Nits: Seems a bit oversharpened, with artifacts, and maybe too much contrast in spots. I think a general softening/glow would have worked here well, excluding the water in the center perhaps to leave it sharp.

Sandys Wrath
by tjbel05

Comment by crowis:
Don't know if this is just my monitor, but I dont' think so. . .seems to be a lot banding in thsi shot, as if there was a bad merge or hue/sat adjustment. Nice idea for a shot though.

Saian
by tjbel05

Comment by blindjustice:
I like the processing and the light is excellent. However, the composition doesn't utilize the best features of this model, the long torso, to the advantage of the final product. Perhaps a wider shot would allow the viewer to take in more of the model, without, as it is now, bouncing from her compelling face and eyes down to the hand and belt and then back again, never allowing focus or rest. A bit more of the scene and this would highlight more of the strengths of your image.

Saian
by tjbel05

Comment by glad2badad:
Senior portrait? Overall I like the lighting and background choice. However, two things that take away IMO are the fallen diagonal branches upper left, and the one bottom right (that mirrors the angle of her arm). Minus those, this would be elevated substantially more score-wise.

Saian
by tjbel05

Comment by bvy:
Not sure about the tilt or the horizon right above her head which gives it a sinking feeling. She has a lovely smile.

amber
by tjbel05

Comment by Gordon_1:
A portrait that has god lighting and composition good processing of the image the model hasnt been overly done good sharpness and the model gives good contact with the camera ..just a nit pick not keen on her body position i would have choose something else..Well done

Maddie
by tjbel05

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
Great smile.

Maddie
by tjbel05

Comment by bvy:
Nice smile. Not sure about the placement and blur of the feet.

Maddie
by tjbel05

Comment by David Ey:
WOW

Maddie
by tjbel05

Comment by ScooterMcNutty:
i like the photo. but i think the whites of her eyes and her teeth should be a little brighter or whiter. at any rate. the colors and exposure are nice.