Comment by GrayGhost: Good story, strong, with lots of dirt, good lighting. It might be better if you backed away a touch, as the image is definitely in-your-face, but maybe that's fitting.
Comment by DrAchoo: Ya! DIRT! I'm looking for real dirt, not "model" dirt. I will say though that I can't quite figure out if the shirt is so dirty it looks like mud, or if it's something else. I may also have been tempted to remove the one splotch over his eye. We like to see eyes in potraits. 7