Comment by Neil: This is great--vibrant lines and great colors. I love it as is, but I see a derivative that's worth looking at: take a look at it cropped at the right a bit, in fact, enough to make it square. Now it has the same flow as wave's, and the direction is uniform. Square shots make nice abstracts. (BTW, thanks for your comments on my shots!)
Comment by JohnBeebe: Wonderful capture of moment. I would crop closer and work on color correction. The skin tone is too pink and could be fixes for a tender moment.
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