Ancient Lines and Patterns
by pmichaud

Comment by Nuzzer:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

First impressions are that the Giraffe is lost in all those lines.

Technically this is ok. Composition is good and I'm a fan of shots where the subject is only a small part of the frame. I agree with some voters that the hue is quite unnatural. The lighting looks like it was in full sun - hence the monotone?

Artistically I like the small in frame concept. I'd like to have the Giraffe's head not in the hole as the Giraffe looks a little awkward like he is. Given the advanced editing rules I'd have cloned a couple of distractions from the fence that seem to be attention grabbers.

In summary a cool shot but an unusual toning.

Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry

Bottoms Up
by pmichaud

Comment by aprudhomme:
lawl!

Ancient Lines and Patterns
by pmichaud

Comment by MelonMusketeer:
I had to look at the comments on this one to see what people thought, and I agree. It's one of those shots that would be right at home in Nat'l Geo, or a fine art mag.

Nuzzling Sea Lions
by pmichaud

Comment by Tammster:
You captured just the perfect moment!

Ancient Lines and Patterns
by pmichaud

Comment by posthumous:
This is goes into my fantasy Posthumous Art Gallery.

Nuzzling Sea Lions
by pmichaud

Comment by tamatama:
Oh, how sweet! They move so fast and you caught a great moment!

Watercolor Iris
by pmichaud

Comment by patio127:
Absolutely gorgeous !

Cold Corn
by pmichaud

Comment by patio127:
Truly meets this challenge- I like the tones-fits the time of year & subject- well done !!!

Bottoms Up
by pmichaud

Comment by patio127:
Another great capture !

Come Swim With Me
by pmichaud

Comment by patio127:
WOW-very nice image-powerful looking legs they have !!! Love the tones .