Comment by Yo_Spiff: I am supposing the idea you are trying to convey with the double exposure is that the reader is enthralled and immersed in this novel. I'm afraid the expression is coming off to me more like a drivers license mug shot. Sorry.
Comment by EL-ROI: The processing is way overdone for my tastes. Way too much saturation, way too much sharpening. Otherwise you did a good job with the complementary colors and the pop of color off the background. Sticking that flower more in the corner might help with the composition getting it more in the third.