Comment by Alyn: I love your idea behind this, but I find the composition rather haphazard. I feel like my eyes are being blocked from viewing the right 1/4th of the image. They just don't even want to look there.
Comment by HarveyG: Excellent speedlight control. The subdued colours make it (as well as the stare down) very businesslike. I find the crop on her forehead unsettling.