Comment by colorcarnival: I'm bummin for you because you have a really good shot here and only a 5.5ish to show for it. Watch out what you do with HSL or saturation because you'll get that line line you see around that top flower. Anywho, this is really good!
Comment by Melethia: I think this might be one of those situations where our friend Henri would have hoped for more "action". A rather common and plain situation for the most part (other than "boys versus girls" as far as seating choice.) Minimal means you can't fix flat lighting (I know - I had the same problem) but editing can't add a story that isn't there either.