Comment by kivgaen: The title is too long.. keep it simple -- like "lovers", or something. It took me too long to figure out what you were trying to say, and then by the time I did I had already lost interest in the story.
Comment by chales: Thanks for all the comments. The oil theme was simply that the fish were oily... it wasn't staged with extra oil, but I did make an effort to make sure the fish did look sufficiently slick for the image using a digital filter.
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