Comment: Absolutely beatuiful. I know that really doesn't actually help much, but I don't have any criticism or suggestion for improvement. Footprints in the snow, maybe?
Comment: Hell of a nice try. Not a submarine, but still a hell of a nice try. Think bringing the clouds out a bit more (overexposing) would have added a bit more interest to the sky.
Comment: The foot railing on the bed is a distraction for me. It took enough of attention that I almost missed the girl going out the door. Maybe you could have lighten her (or at least her fact) a bit more.