Just Out of Reach
by CNovack

Comment:
So cute :-). I am not sure your lighting/composition works for me. The main focus is really on the very light coloured sandwich. Perhaps if you had cropped it so only part of the plate rim and a few chips were in the pic the attention would have been more on the dog. I love the way he "merges" into the BG.

Fawn
by millsa

Comment:
Overall very nice. I would have darkened the big branch in front a bit. For me it competes directly with the fawn, both in position as well as color. Perhaps also sharpen the littl;e guy a touch (more). I really like your background and general composition though

help me mom!
by Giles

Comment:
this image is hauntingly beautiful

doing time
by timfythetoo

Comment:
What a great little model :-). Not sure if the lefy hand side of the pic really adds to your image. I think I would have prefered a much tighter crop onto the window.

innocence
by PennyStreet

Comment:
Very nice composition. I am just not sure where your FP is. to me the little faces look OOF? The chest feathers seem in focus. Would prefer the faces in focus.

Haunted
by MinsoPhoto

Comment:
I know you did this intentionally, but for my taste this is just too dark :-(.

Trust
by h2

Comment:
great DOF, I like the sepia/color treatment on this. Perhaps would have been nicer with more light in his eyes.

Hello
by izadoodle

Comment:
great shot, love the way he looks straight at your camera. Since this was adv editing I would have probably got rid of these light coloured flecks - looks like something he was eating perhaps. I am also wondering if you could have cropped a bit of the dark body part off at the bottom. It seems to add little to nothing to the image IMO. OTOH I like the green at the top, it contrasts nicely with your subject.

Day Lily, Summer Evening
by Bear_Music

Comment:
This is an amazing photograph - and the fact that you took it with a camera phone -WOW. Love it

Glass Through Glass
by craigdm

Comment:
I usually like dark images, but this is just too dark for me.