by bspurgeon

Comment:
Great expressions. How much control over the point of focus do you have when you use a lensbaby? Just a question here as I don't have one. In this image, for example, I don't at all mind the softness in the figures but I wonder about the sharpest part being the backpacks (admittedly part of the story, but not the most important part IMO)

Distractically Assisted
by alexlky

Comment:
Lighting is nice. The background jumble works well with this subject, I think, and it's dark enough that it doesn't distract. They do not look over-fed :(

1750
by pixelpig

Comment:
You did a good job of bringing out all the people - you made the back lighting work for you.

Symmetrical Stripes
by JiaBob

Comment:
You said you would like comments on entries, not necessarily this one but on entries, so I came over to see what you have that I voted on. Gave this one a 6. I thought it fit the challenge very well and was nicely focused. Head on is tough but you pulled it off and again it works particularly well for "symmetry". I think this one could have scored quite a bit better with a few post-processing tweaks. I would have liked to see blacker blacks (especially) and whiter whites in the zebra - maybe a little dodge and burn (esp). The image feels crooked. I would rotate clockwise. You might also try this in black and white - zebra images work particularly well that way and the green wouldn't overpower the subject if you did. Just some ideas I would try - I think you have a very nice photo here.

Family Values
by Germaine

Comment:
Definite sense of the family that plays together stays together here, especially in the main grouping.

Bowery
by insteps

Comment:
Man, I feel the heat. Hope that fan is pointed in! Well seen. He looks very tired of the heat.

by LevT

Comment:
Terrific find. Looks as if this isn't the first time they have done this :) Nice textures and great expressions. Were they watching a parade or just life passing by?

waiting for nothing
by jagar

Comment:
Too cool. I'm surprised to see the empty chair - I'm used to all chairs facing the street for people watching. Agree with others - another awesome shot and it's hard to imagine a better for the FS

greetings
by daisydavid

Comment:
Very nice framing.

by LevT

Comment:
Terrific juxtaposition.