Day off from school
by siggi

Comment:
what a great picture for these kids to have; so professional; so unstaged; you make it look effortless, and the square crop only accentuates your subject. I like how there is different focus points as well; Perhaps the only criticismis that the color is a bit washed on the front face and some of the outfits; but heck- there is no accounting for clown suits!

solitary
by Tuckersmom

Comment:
Fantastic grainy quality and texture to the flower, and well textured and developed hairy quality to the shaft and stem. Its great to see the backside of the flower, with a tear? in such a perfect position to ad visual interest for the eye. Perhaps a version without the waterdrop would be nice too, I would be intersted in seeing a bunch of shots from this shoot; be sure to post them in your portfolio. Great shot, good luck.

Portland Head Light
by jaxter

Comment:
I took this picturte once. I like the birds and the position of the tower in the square crop. A bit blown out though, but still better than average.

Mirror Image
by Jutilda

Comment:
This is terrific; surreal, sexy, mysterious,the lighting, the colorsof flesh and stucco playing off each other... its got all those great qualities and perhaps its a bit voyueristic for the viewer, which ultimately could heighten the experience. great negative space too; its so frequently done so terribly wrong and unnecessary, its great to see it used so successfully. this shoud ribbon. good luck.

Ernie and Me
by jeffzoet

Comment:
Great shot, was ernie's father a fuzzy?

After School
by Germaine

Comment:
This is a really nice variation of the other shot "lunch break." This is dreamlike; perfectly composed. this needs a muted matte and mountedas a huge print on the wall. fantastic.

Back Porch
by Germaine

Comment:
beautiful colors; just enough stuff in the picture. Absolutely underrated as the challenge went. Nice work.

Lunch Run
by Germaine

Comment:
Absolutely great feel here; the stucco, the soft colors the soft focus, the interesting shadows, and the ambience of the shade. terrific.

7 Deadly Sins
by Kimberly75

Comment:
I like it but you have to pay more attention to the focus and exposure. Nice try though.

Message edited by author 2006-02-25 17:44:04.

Pride, sloth.
by Mazka

Comment:
Isn't it more like lust? great feel to this. A little dark on the face, but this works with the overall shot.