Breaktime...
by tfarrell23

Comment:
Did you shoot this in an overhead mirror or gain access to an upper floor?

Happy White Blood Cell Hard at Work
by Turbotech

Comment:
I will be sending my friends to see this after the voting.

Bridge
by draney4

Comment:
I would try to adjust the tones a little to darken the brightest parts, and to bring out the sun rays as much as possible. Maybe you did that already. Great clouds and capture.

Back In Black
by sher

Comment:
The thin inner border is a little to close in appearance to the strings, and creates a somewhat jarring, confusing point in the lower right (maybe that's on purpose). Not sure what I'd do about it--maybe make it 100% black and have the outer border just a touch lighter.

John³
by jmsetzler

Comment:
I really think your "vision" need not exclude DPC, it just may preclude more ribbons until the site (and the voters) progress further.

Sunspot
by GeneralE

Comment:
Here's a link to the original from which I created my entry. The off-center subject is the dark spot on the projected image of the sun, just like the title says ....

Original

Bubbles
by pitsaman

Comment:
A good photo for the Mirror Project too!

Turf War
by GeneralE

Comment:

Originally posted by hbunch7187: *Critique Club* This is very cute. I like the concept very much. The angle and framing/cropping seem to me to be just fine. I think having the stapler coming out of the bottom left is good. What is bothering me here is the background. Mostly the tape dispenser. It is right in the middle of the 'action'. I wonder how this would work sitting on a desk with just the wall being the background... ~Heather~

I think I rather like the natural business of the background, but it is poorly (and hurriedly) arranged. The main changes I'd make would be to have the other office items forming a ring around the fighters, facing in and focusing the action, and to have a stack of forms that aren't so bright. If I had known this little camera would capture the detail so sharply, I'd have partially extruded a staple to make some cool fangs.

I'm at this place three days a week, so it shouldn't be hard to try a do-over, maybe with my camera this time. Thanks for your comments!

--Paul

"Yummy"
by ladpupmoe

Comment:
It's WHAT the cat thinks is yummy which has me worried here.

Morning Sun, Scratched Curtain
by wsargen

Comment:
AT least we have a good clue to the identity of the perpetrator.